I think it looks good however it could do with a bit of tweaking.

I think our reviewer was expecting a bit too much from a Heffner-(and thus, Playboy-) funded film that it be in any way critical of the sacred Playboy empire and its greasy mogul, or indeed any of the values it holds dear (liberation through, er, cuteness).

Or perhaps the fact of its financial backing isn't widely known. If it's not it really should be. Moreover, a 12A rating seems extremely low to me for a film which is funded by a porn empire to promote its values to the teen market.